My Love

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/c/i/c…" alt="" title="cicilalalaplz" />Hello again!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> I see that you payed a lot of attention to negative space! this is good! <3 it looks great!
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/> I love the wrinkles in the dress~ pretty~
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Green"/>beautiful job on the hands and face <3

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/> I kind of want more variations in hues of blue/green in the background~ ya know~ just to add a little pop~
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>the skirt. it flows about 2 feet from her in the center, but only 6 inches everywhere else, wrinkles are cool and add lots of movement to a piece, but dont let them take over!
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red"/>A-N-A-T-O-M-Y. whurrrr okay, the butt JUTS out of her back... thats a no no. Butts are round and smooth and flow from the spine...
also, her body~ judging by the position of her knee and where her body bends...~ the abdomen seems a little small?

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Hee I actually tried this pose in front of a mirror to explore the position of her left arm... and it was kind of uncomfortable... It works... but its uncomfortable. I guess what Im saying is that it looks fine and its Do-able but don't be afraid of perspective <3 let her hand travel into the distance a little (to take some strain off her shoulder) and add some depth to her pose <3

<img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/m/o/m…" alt="" title="monkeydancerplz" /> and thats all! <3